Steadygain
TSP Elite
Good to see you writing again. I think it focuses you and it is therapuetic for a lot of us.
Thank you Frixxxx ~~ but it's not as easy as it sounds. It's very much like writting a song (both playing the music and the lyrics that flow with it).
In the right frame of mind it flows -- it's very natural and it usually comes out very beautiful.
Yesterday ~~ somehow Birch's comment about me being a 'romantic' simply sparked a beautiful story .....
...writting off the top of my head .... I could see the scenery and all like I was there and made a trail with a wide variety of stops .... with the flowers lining the trail and all the more making the stops extra beautiful.
...it's kind of funny because I had the people too -- what the guy and girl looked like and could see the transition from one place to the next .... and how it got better and better......
It didn't stand out that I was writting in the first person --( I and You) because it was simply characters filling scenes ... it was a natural flow...
Today when I read over it ---- It was disasterous -- I mean honestly I'm like this isn't a story ........ it's a letter or an autobiography ... and from that perspective it just shattered everything ... none of it flowed and it no longer made any sense.
So .... sorry ... my friend ... I lost what was there and it's strange but I don't see it taking off.
Maybe something else sometime later --
But I really appreciate your support !! Thank You !!!!
Have a great weekend everyone and enjoy !